The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Wieners are those who try one more time before giving up. Prompt states that never give up means keep trying and never give up on your goals. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly agree with prompt that never give up means keep pushing until you achieve your goals for following reasons.
To begin with, wieners are the one who keep on trying to achieve their goal every time before they win. It is blatant that in this process many people will try to de-motivate you by saying all negative things and when you will achieve it they will be the one pressing you. For instance, when Thomas Edison was in process of inventing light bulb many people thought that it’s impossible but he kept on trying and trying and after approx 1000 attempt he achieve his goals which he was trying to achieve from long time. Its prove that trying make man successful.
Moreover, some time person is so close to his goal and he/she gives up unknowingly which is the biggest debacle of his/her life. When you invest all your time and efforts in certain thing to accomplish make sure that you achieve your goals no matter what it takes because if you stop trying in between and later on found that you were to close to achieve your goals you will regret your whole life. For instance, in last semester one of my friend was tired of studying one subject in which he was experiencing failure and in his last attempt he did not study thinking that he will again fail this time but that semester paper was not tough many people got good grades except him because he did not study and give up soon.
Finally, if your goal is high then it is plausible that it will take lots of attempt to achieve it because it will see how bad you want to achieve your goal before giving up. For instance, to exemplify, before stepping on the moon it took lots and lots of unsuccessful try to get out of earth’s orbit. For instance this goal was seeing impossible but after many attempts and much failure Apollo 11 landed on moon which was the biggest success for humankind.
In conclusion, it is apt to say that never give up means to keep trying to keep pushing to your potential but never stop working on the goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'attempt' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'attempts'.
Suggestion: attempts
...trying and trying and after approx 1000 attempt he achieve his goals which he was tryin...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...trying and after approx 1000 attempt he achieve his goals which he was trying to achiev...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proof' (noun) instead of prove (verb)?
Suggestion: proof
...s trying to achieve from long time. Its prove that trying make man successful. Mor...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun attempt seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of attempts'.
Suggestion: lots of attempts
... then it is plausible that it will take lots of attempt to achieve it because it will see how b...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was the biggest success for humankind. In conclusion, it is apt to say that nev...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al but never stop working on the goals.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4552238806 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10263759933 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450248756219 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2969828488 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34092848785 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15357429119 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144906224523 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26013825957 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151859146203 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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