The expression Never never give up means to keep trying and never stop working on your goals

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The expression Never never give up means to keep trying and never stop working on your goals.

There is no shortage of opinion on the expression " Never, never give up". Personally, I believe that integration of faith and perseverance is the key to complete any task. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.

To begin with, we human beings are born with a purpose in life. A person without an motive and goals in life are like an empty pot without water. Different people has different perspective in their life. Some wants to become doctor, engineer and some wants to become entrepreneur, does not matter whatever path we choose or whatever field we want to walk, we should keep faith and have proper vision of life. My personal experience is a great example of this. Since childhood I wanted to pursue my career as a engineer. I knew that their going to be a great challenge ahead. I was only the girl in my class although i was the single lady in the class and it was difficult for me to be among the boys but in front of dream to be an engineer it was nothing. More importantly, it boost my strength as a girl. For this reason, I believe never ever give up a dream.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ith a purpose in life. A person without an motive and goals in life are like an em...
^^
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ildhood I wanted to pursue my career as a engineer. I knew that their going to be...
^
Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... was only the girl in my class although i was the single lady in the class and it...
^
Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...er it was nothing. More importantly, it boost my strength as a girl. For this reason,...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'believe'.
Suggestion: never believe
... strength as a girl. For this reason, I believe never ever give up a dream.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4380952381 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54626132045 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8160924609 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6923076923 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1420156464 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527678699191 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117140224147 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14588976644 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784603789192 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ith a purpose in life. A person without an motive and goals in life are like an em...
^^
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ildhood I wanted to pursue my career as a engineer. I knew that their going to be...
^
Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... was only the girl in my class although i was the single lady in the class and it...
^
Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...er it was nothing. More importantly, it boost my strength as a girl. For this reason,...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'believe'.
Suggestion: never believe
... strength as a girl. For this reason, I believe never ever give up a dream.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4380952381 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54626132045 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8160924609 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6923076923 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1420156464 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527678699191 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117140224147 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14588976644 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784603789192 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.