Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Enjoying life doesnot have any time and age constrains. Happiness is just the mental state of one's life. However, Personally I believe that life will be more fun, challenging and more joyful as we became older. Moreover, life become more elate when we understand deeper meaning of it. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, My childhood happiness was just limited on chocolates and toys but as time passes i came to realize that life is beyond that happiness. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, i was very reserved kind of person since childhood, my childhood passes on closed room with toys and i wasnt able to figured out that what is happiness. As i was growing up i came to realized that happiness is something that comes from inside, does not matter whatever state we are in.
- Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed 70
- Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in countryside What problems does his cause What can be done to solve this problem 78
- Some young adult wants independence from thier parents as soon as 60
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 66
- The expression Never never give up means to keep trying and never stop working on your goals 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 1977.66487455 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70394736842 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59112825563 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 618.680645161 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9238095099 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127303127443 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635914191663 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626750473666 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107121923296 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908832479676 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.