The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
Our eating habits have undergone a dramatic change in the last decades owing to the hectic city life that most people lead. Although people are unanimous that there has been a change in this regard and they care more about what they eat, whether this shift has been for the better or not is still a moot point. To the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, despite the developments in science and improvements of hygienic conditions in preparing food, the food we eat today is by far less healthy compared to the past.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that due to the variation of environment, everyone knows that today we eat not that food which we have eaten before. Broadly speaking, today the environment is much worse than before: air, water, rain and etc, all influences on ground especially on fruits and vegetables and so forth. Additionally, Due to this fact and for the storage of products we add different preservative and chemicals which are also bad for our health. Delving further into the issue reveals that different kinds of food additives we use, due to the change in lifestyle not only are genetically modified ingredients, but also human body are expose to different disease. As a corollary, in today's hectic world because of our high speed life we often replaced home fresh food on fast unhealthy food, which is why majority of us has problems with stomach. A tangible example that sheds move light on this issue is our ancestors. A myriad of People in the past were stronger and healthier than today because they had strong immunity and also environment was clean.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that population in all around the world is on the rise and nowadays an unhealthy diet can cause various health problems. Scientifically speaking, today's a vast majority of people choose sedentary lifestyle that is harmful for health. In fact, many people rely on fast foods or pre-prepared meals that often contain too much fat. To put it in other words, today's sedentary lifestyle and convenience foods provide fertile ground for people to confront obesity, diabetes or even heart disease. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, the foods we eat today are much healthier due to the strict process of supervising. Additionally, government puts great emphasis on the quality of foods and enacts strict laws and regulations in order to protect high quality of foods.Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To put it in a nutshell, nowadays variation of environment greatly affects on the organic foods. In addition, human bodies are exposing to diseases because of different additives and genetically modified foods. On the other hand, as population growth , people opt for sedentary lifestyle cause different problems such as obesity or heart disease . Also populations in developed countries are increasingly overweight and this has happened because of fast and processed foods.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259856630824 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.148745519713 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10752688172 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0627240143369 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0376344086022 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0394265232975 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83404903099 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286738351254 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0752688172043 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00358422939068 0.0209618222197 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0179211469534 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3110.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 510.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09803921569 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36862745098 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280392156863 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205882352941 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141176470588 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83404903099 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 63.1248572677 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2857142857 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2704410165 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.095238095 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.324929972 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.71942446043 1.45489161554 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100611625484 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678643453222 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460372941446 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109088418594 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119507649747 0.114077575197 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095145282241 0.0781384742642 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435673541885 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.017486799355 0.067059652881 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239376225907 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903504133503 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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