Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Celebrities are the epitome of success for many thanks they receive from social media, and are more often than not, imitated by those who have an insatiable desire for fame. Although they are adored by myriads of individuals, not all people adore them equally. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether words of celebrities have more influence on young adults or elderly. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that words and opinions of well-known people might have deleterious effects not only on adults' lives but also elderly. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, for vast majorities of people celebrities serve as an arbiter taste, public opinion, morality and so forth. When different kinds of disorders like short term relationship, drug abuse and so on, are leading celebrities, mature people would think that their lives are not ideal contrast to the ideas of their proponents. Generally phrased, listen to the words of celebrities might have negative impacts on the lives of people especially adults owing to the fact that they do not make a secret of alcoholic, drug abuse, relationship and so forth. As a tangible example, if people take their words into account, they might think that these kinds of immoral behavior are acceptable. To elucidate more on this issue, opinions of these celebrities not only can destroy adults' dream and affect their future negatively but also can mislead elderly people.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that not only opinions but also their behavior and manner can bring negative impact on people's lives. If we take a minute to ponder over it crowds of famous people present on screen, magazines and so forth, in an inappropriate way. For instance, they show off with smoke on the magazine and people might think that this is a true behavior. So, such destructive habitat by well-known people not only can destroy mental and physical health but also can contribute greatly to low self-esteem and self- confidence. Going into the depth, if elderly and adults want to take celebrities opinions into consideration, they should be aware and intelligent to pay attention to wise and precise ideas.
However, this is the one side of a coin. Celebrities play an important role in every given society and they have venerable personalities. Indeed, their words and ideas are much closer to the younger people thank the fact that the way celebrities think is closer to adults than elderly and it is more likely younger people listen to their words significantly. For example, when a soccer player offers some suggestions for people, it has more influence on younger people because they know him as a role model and mimics his behavior extensively.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that celebrities play a key role in people's lives and humans are more likely to listen to the word of famous people. But we have to evaluate some positive and negative aspects of their lives like immoral behaviors. In fact, we should not try to use their opinions without thinking wisely and deeply because their lives might not be ideal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sent on screen, magazines and so forth, in an inappropriate way. For instance, they show off with smoke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2743.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00547445255 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66519518193 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483576642336 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2306411068 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.260869565 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8260869565 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78260869565 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173684727225 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533394672443 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330907055233 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10693244674 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246324347717 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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