The more people feel disappointed the more they want to change their lives. If I had a friend, who would have been waiting for my advice whether they should continue working at a previous job or changing it, I would advise them first to transform their attitude towards their career due to several main causes.
Initially, the fears and old habits they have do not allow them to do what they really love. The only way to overcome them is braveness to try something new in their career. For example, influencers such as Oprah Winfrey became successful due to her braveness. She overcame the hardships she faced to step forward to the dream job. She did not change her job completely however she could find the way how to alter her hatred regarding interviewing people. As a result, she has changed not only herself but the whole country, giving people a hope to be able to change themselves.
It could also be said that some people chose their career path under pressure of circumstances or despair. They believed that the chosen job might bring them satisfaction and be rewarding. Nevertheless, some of them have realised that they are bored and do not see an opportunity to be developed at it. Some of them find themselves at the self-employment and feel happy, others do charity and devote their time to help others. As it was with me when I decided to change my workplace to freelance and then to be engaged in expertise. Now I feel the fulfilment that did the right choice. In such cases, people definitely need changes in their work to witness beneficial outcomes from the activity they are occupied.
To conclude I strongly recommend to my friend to change their views on their career opportunities as the most effective decision in their life. It does not matter what they change: the whole workplace or functional obligations, the first step towards alterations is always in their heart and mind.
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can cause this? What solution you suggest? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.-Syerapke- re-write 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...lly, the fears and old habits they have do not allow them to do what they really l...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... despair. They believed that the chosen job might bring them satisfaction and be re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, then, for example, i feel, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77039274924 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66717926941 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5490006447 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929608959866 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300954827311 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031415651375 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629952146973 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190842862194 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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