Getting the advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting that from your peers.
Most of the people opt to make decisions after getting advice from others since it allows them to get aware of diverse aspects of the situation. A plethora of people is in the conviction that suggestions which have received from elder friends are more worthy as they have more experiences. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that the peers usually offer practical advice. I am of the opinion that, both of the mentioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, undoubtedly, one of the primary purposes of taking others’ recommendations is getting acquainted with plausible consequences, either positive or negative. Therefore, the age of the people is accounted as the main driver of having the more maturity in this regard. Work experience is a good example that people often ask their older friends to share their experience with them. Furthermore, older friends may have objective viewpoints, and it is a precious thing because it assists them to see other facets of the decision that seem unimportant or even invisible to ordinary outsight. For instance, in the work experience example, they can talk about the work atmosphere, future job opportunities in that particular field or the possible obstacles to get promotions, and also how people can distinguish themselves in that job. Admittedly, these are incredible issues that people can hear from their older friends.
Another crucial fact that should be taken into consideration is the friends who belong to the comparatively same age category has the same goal and attitude toward different topics. There are more familiar with the current situation; consequently, they may have more updated information. This similar situation is of the utmost factor for getting fabulous advice which is so useful. Besides, as the peers have better understanding of each other, they are more intimate with each other that are extremely vital element. As a result, they can consult when they just need to be calm, without getting any rational advice. They can sit beside each other with a cup of coffee, and have pleasurable conversation regarding the problem, and getting the good decision without any mistake is not the matter of concern for them.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that people can use suggestion from different friend according to the position. In some cases they need to make accurate choice so they have to get precisely suggestion and further experience will be very helpful. But sometimes just some affection talking is enough; however, fashionable knowledge of their counterparts should not be overlooked.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20618556701 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.146391752577 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125773195876 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577319587629 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494845360825 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115463917526 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0350515463918 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86715906664 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247422680412 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103092783505 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247422680412 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185567010309 0.0139019557991 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2736.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 438.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24657534247 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383561643836 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305936073059 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214611872146 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157534246575 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86715906664 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.22659957 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0526315789 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7194162866 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 53.6462388849 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.40650406504 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278157882677 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0859469459369 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0386279494372 0.0752933317313 51% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485848812173 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0967913347315 0.151897553556 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114033822628 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537313854683 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40739613097 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750129233853 0.067059652881 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198155005742 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668374883311 0.0618886996521 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.