Government always fund many parts of sociaty. But as we know, these funding are limited. Since, government should has peiorty to suppor which feild that is more important than other. Some believe that government should give funds to arts. Other think athletics such as sponsored Olympis tems are crucial thing which have to support. Admittedly, some people believe that art is essential part in our life, and government should funds gallaries or exhibitions, because may people intrested with. In my opinion, I think, athletics should be recieved finantial support from government. In this essay, I will elaborate on a specific reason to explain my point of view in that subject.
First, and foremost. support ethletical team has benefits for teams members and to country that the team related to it. when any player get any model like gold or bronze, the benefit is not to this player. His country also will be famous. For example, every one in the world kown Abarazil, this is because, this country has a lot of expert player, In addition, it was a sponsored olymbic teams many time. This example illustrates how is important to country to fund ethletics such as olympic teams.
Furthermore, when country become famous, this will improve it economically, a lot of people travel to that country in order to watch the sports or gymnastis. Therefor this will fresh it economically, hence, these people need hotels and restaurants. moreover, this will attract tourist to visit that famous place. This is a compelling example from my real live, when I was in the dental school, I travelled to Barazil with my friend to attend olympic plays in that year. We saw a huge number of people who came to injoy watching to their favorat team. Therefore you can imagine how government support is important to people and country.
In conclusion, the statement that government should fund ethletics is as persuasive as it stands. This is baced on expositions that mention above. This funding has a fundemental effect on both players and government.
Government always fund many parts of sociaty. But as we know, these funding are limited. Since, government should has peiorty to suppor which feild that is more important than other. Some believe that government should give funds to arts. Other think athletics such as sponsored Olympis tems are crucial thing which have to support. Admittedly, some people believe that art is essential part in our life, and government should funds gallaries or exhibitions, because may people intrested with. In my opinion, I think, athletics should be recieved finantial support from government. In this essay, I will elaborate on a specific reason to explain my point of view in that subject.
First, and foremost. support ethletical team has benefits for teams members and to country that the team related to it. when any player get any model like gold or bronze, the benefit is not to this player. His country also will be famuos. For example, every one in the world kown Abarazil, this is because, this country has a lot of expert player, In addition, it was a sponsored olymbic teams many time. This example illustrates how is important to country to fund ethletics such as olympic teams.
Furthermore, when country become famous, this will improve it economically, a lot of people travel to that country inorder to watch the sports or gymnastis. THerefore this will fresh it economically, hence, these people need hotels and resturants. moreover, this will attract tourist to visit that famous place. This is a compelling example from my real live, when I was in the dental school, I travelled to Albarazil with my friend to attend olympic plays in that year. We saw a huge number of people who came to injoy watching to their favorat team. Therefore you can imagine how government support is important to people and country.
In conclusion, the statement that government should fund ethletics is as persuasive as it stands. This is baced on expositions that mention above. This funding has a fundamental effect on both players and government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Suggestion: many times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01474926254 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66352897086 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8145037266 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9130434783 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345393196477 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116528256903 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153500498815 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226368006035 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240386233954 0.0645574589148 372% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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