The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which
one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation’s government
to take to protect the environment.
1. Fund the research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar
and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there.
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
Nowadays friendly energy sources are boosted around the world. most of non renewable sources are
disappearing quickly, such as petroleum sources, due to the high demand of energy in industrialized countries. I strongly claim that the government should invest in projects to search new renewable sources of energy such as solar and wind energy to protect the enviroment.
Firstly, most of the big cities are very polluted due to the burn of carbon sources in the enviroment. most of the transportation media - including buses, cars, airplanes and trains - works only with gasoline. Therefore, the government should support research related to renewable sources which do not held contamination and assure a more efficiently product.There are a lot of advantages in that area, for example, in my country we have a scientist called Frankling Chan who is developing buses based on hydrogen sources in order to reduce contamination. In addition, the National Institute of Electricity has projects related to the use of wind as energy sources. All these kinds of energy may help to protect the environment at the same time that supply people's needs.
Second, many people in big cities are getting sick due to the high contamination enviroment. According to statistics, people may suffer from lung, nose and eyes ills due to air pollution. Indeed, I recently traveled to Mexico, which is one of the biggest and most populated cities in the world - it has around 22 million people living there - and I got red eyes and runny nose during my first week because of the polluted air in the place. Regardless of the technological advances in the big cities, the government should carry out more new strategies to enhance people´s welfere.
Finally, the country will need more professional and well- educated professionals to develop friendly energy sources. Hence, people will have to study more to become expert in that fields. If the government invest in renewable energy, it has to train the people who will work in those project. While those people are training whether inside the country or abroad, the important things is the country would count with well-educated inhabitants, providing better ideas to start with. In addition to that, a well- educated population is positive because they may improve the development of the country as a whole, at the same time that new generations copy those habits to themselves.
To sum up, I want to say that I definetely consider that the government should be in favor of researching realated new renewable sources of energy since it allows to enhance transportation media, to reduce some health problems and to improve the quality of professionals in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14541387025 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92538935218 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8913822533 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.777777778 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790249226281 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252175139691 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213865268435 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418445872086 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290146342641 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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