The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation’s government to take to protect the environment?
1. Fund research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there.
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
Throughout the history, the human and wide range of animal has utilized various natural resources due to diverse purposes. Not surprisingly that these limited sources has notably decreased in recent decades owing to overused of them. Therefore, it is human's turn that plays its role in order to protect the environment. There are varied approaches which can be applied, but I am of the opinion that, the one of the most effective one is regulating the rules that control people's behaviors and lead their attitude toward this fundamental issue. So, the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, protecting the environment is radical mindset that should be implemented in society. Undoubtedly, in some countries people are already familiar with this concept, although, they may not pay enough attention to it. But, public awareness is the top matter of concern for many governors, and that is why they have concluded having some regulations is a primary step to familiarize the citizens with the extent of importance of preserving the environment. Furthermore, when people prevent doing some conduction as the laws have banned them, their next generation will learn that this is not appropriate behavior. As a result, the children will do correct behaviors spontaneously, and they will convey the massage of caring the environment to their child. Gradually, the wrong behavior will disappear.
Another crucial fact that should be taken into consideration is that people are always looking for the convenience and benefit. Admittedly, the human will not do the right deed in many cases unless something enforce him. The overwhelmed of people know that earth is deal with serious problem because of too much usage of fossil fuels, but why they overlook this truth? The answer has two responses. the first group are the one who do not want to abandon their old habit and have tendency to keep their wrong beliefs, and the second one are other who earn considerable amount of financial income. Both of these people should be enforced to obey specific rule.
On the basis of the point, mentioned above, I am convinced that regulating some bills will have influential effect. Because the rules not only give necessary information to individuals but also make them to start new lifestyle with innovate mindset.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...is truth? The answer has two responses. the first group are the one who do not want...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.17619047619 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102380952381 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547619047619 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0428571428571 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102380952381 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.0351676179071 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76787066772 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261904761905 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107142857143 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0285714285714 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238095238095 0.0139019557991 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2357.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 380.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20263157895 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373684210526 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286842105263 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202631578947 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152631578947 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76787066772 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602631578947 0.524397521467 115% => OK
Word variations: 72.6021861738 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6527255454 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.052631579 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.6842105263 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.28695652174 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494562605073 0.300154397459 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0586868943713 0.103427244359 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.044667720909 0.0752933317313 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472340826771 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135272452959 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19184458709 0.114077575197 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948778254299 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.431233732769 0.336927656856 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107189563821 0.067059652881 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368022104413 0.210909579961 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591937531432 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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