Government has done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating habits
Nowadays, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, thus the authority is paying more attention to the living qualities of citizens, including healthy lifestyles. Some individuals reckon that the government fails to bear its responsibility on raising the public’s awareness of living healthy lives, however, I can hardly concur with this opinion and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, the government has distributed lots of funds to building multiple infrastructures, like gyms, sports fields or other facilities used for building physical fitness. Under the circumstance of fast-paced lives, there is an increasing number of people suffering from mounting pressure generated from excessive workload or school assignments, thus the time can be devoted to doing exercise is diminished in a large extent. However, with these facilities erected by the funds allocated from the government, citizens are enabled to take the advantage of those facilities adjacent to their communities to do more exercises, through which they can possess robust bodies and lay a solid foundation for challenges emerging in their future career paths. For instance, my father, as an eminent architect, is usually occupied with his works, like drawing drafts or erecting models for construction, which does exert detrimental effects on his health. However, with the facilities constructed in our community, my father is capable of going to the gym during his limited spare time, hence, he can get rid of the workload for a while and build up his strengths through accelerating blood circulation and stretching out his arms and legs. This example reveals that the government’s endeavor in building infrastructures to stimulate city dwellers to lead healthy lives has obtained great attainment.
What’s more, the regime also devotes time and energy to awake individuals’ consciousness of healthy lifestyles. Initially, some local governments post a bunch of advertisement in public transits, like bus stations or railway platforms, to propagate the deficiencies of unhealthy habits, such as takeaway food or cigarettes. Meanwhile, in order to engage individuals’ interests in these advertisements, these local governments even pour a large number of funds to design advertisements, involving more novel factors or components related with youngsters’ prevailing trend. Apart from that, the government also launches some other activities to remind city dwellers the significance of healthy lifestyles. For instance, in my university, every month, there are some officers from varieties of departments coming to our school to have a surveillance on our dining hall to ensure that students’ diets are healthy enough without excessive chemical additives. At the same time, they also call upon all students to purchase food based on the comprehensive consideration of the nutrients we ought to take to maintain our bodies’ well-being. Therefore, the government has also spared no efforts to reinforce individuals’ awareness of leading healthy lives with the mentioned above activities.
Admittedly, there are still some firm measures that the authority can take to further encourage city dwellers to improve their healthy habits, nevertheless, there is no denying that the government’s recent commitment in fostering individuals’ healthy habits has made indelible achievements, which should not be ignored.
In a nutshell, the government has taken sufficient measures to educate citizens about the importance of healthy lifestyles through their commitment to building infrastructures and awaking individuals’ consciousness of healthy habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3186.0 1977.66487455 161% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83516483516 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45096744317 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562271062271 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 989.1 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5803664742 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.411764706 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1176470588 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150963024635 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531170366639 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551093406029 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108354978499 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663612080572 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 11.7677419355 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 58.1214874552 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 10.9000537634 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 86.8835125448 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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