The government is not doing enough work to educate people the importance of nutrition and healthy eating.
In modern society, with people’s life improved in many ways, they become to pay more attention to healthy diet. People are more focus on their daily meals’ quality. There are some trigger heated debates that come to people’s daily life: Has the government already did enough work to educate people to eat healthy food? I, personally, agree with this statement for following reasons.
Firstly, the governments always encourage the communities to organize activities, like some presentations, with nutrition and healthy eating habits. A Chinese proverb says : “Hunger breeds discontentment”, which means that it is really essential for people to eat the food with nutrition and have healthy eating. Governments also focus on this issue and command the communities to teach their residents about the various vegetable nutrition and healthy recipes. For instance, in my community, neighborhood committee chairman usually holds diverse activities to impart people importance of healthy diet. It is really useful for us to improve our diet and let us know more food nutrition.
Secondly, the governments put their efforts on the way to propagate healthy eating habit. Generally speaking, the governments invest the billions of money for people’s healthy diet every year by internet and books, which teach people how to keep the healthy diet. If people want to find something related to food nutrition, they will search detailed information on the internet. For example, before people cook food, most of them will search on the internet to find some recipes and the food are full of nutrition. In this way, people could understand how essential the nutrition and healthy eating are.
Admittedly, there are some works that the governments do not educate people very well. The governments still persist to let residents to know the importance of the healthy eating habits. Above all, I agree with the statement for two reasons that the governments encourage the communities to organize activities and put their efforts on the way to propagate healthy eating habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4509202454 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91900149432 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506134969325 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8171425932 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384922649501 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129687015159 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967081802689 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245287200998 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393857399861 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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