Groups or organizations are the products of human civilization,as human beings have been evolving for millions of years, this indentity of community have always been accompanying with us. It is just the ethincs group represent who we were, what we are and whatwe will be. Also there are many essential organizations for people. Thus the groups or organizations are important to people. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, the ethinc group made the same race of people together. Especially in regional issues like Taiwan Issues. Because decades ago the KMP failed in the native war during 1945-1949. They led thousands of soldiers who lost the war to Taiwan, the biggest island of China. While these soldiers and officers borned in the mainland, they missed their home town so much. Decades later, as the connection of mainland of China and Taiwan were getting more closer, they were permitted to meet their relatives in the mainland. Even if the hair had turned white, the brown eyes and yellow skins showed that all of them were still Chinese. THe recoginiton of race can not be cut down merely by regional issues. The ethnic group is the common concerning between the Taiwan channel.
In addtion,as a Chinese, I should say that with out the China Comuunism Party(short for CCP), one of the most important organizations for Chinese people, we can not live a better life after the establishment of new China,1949. At that time, China was so weak that millions of people are straving to death, besides, there were many threat oversees like the cold war. the CCP made the right determination that all of Chinese people should focus on developing economy instead of other business. With the leadership of CCP, the lives of Chinese people are getting better and better. For now the people's lives in some of the regions of China can compete with that in some major cities all over thw world.
Finally, the importance of groups or organizations to some people is the self-recognition. Still, the CCP, as there are so many great achievements gained by this party, the partisanship is more and more attractive to young people in China. Sometimes the partisanship means a better chance to get jobs. What's more, being a partisan is also the dream of some people to accomplish their own targets in lives. One of my friends enlisted in the CCP when he just entered the university. This was a great honor for him as some kind of evaluation for him.
In all, we are all livng in different kinds of groups or organizations, this identificaiton show who you were,what you are doing or what you want to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, so, still, thus, while, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82628062361 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72017976966 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530066815145 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5533388199 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3461538462 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2692307692 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211046753414 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672499886744 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100198478544 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116934884837 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654499565955 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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