A high-paying job or low-paying job?
Each year, many students graduated from school and are seeking a job. Many of them aim at working for the high-paying job with high working hours. Some people show great interest in the high-pay job, while others are more willing to working for the low-paying job. It is obvious that every individual has his own opinion about the advantages and disadvantages when it comes to comparing the low-paying job or the high-paying job one; for me, I think, the advantages of the high-paying job outweigh disadvantages of the low-paying job so my choice is definitely the high-paying job.
Now let’s use the popular analyzing named “SWOT Analysis”, which commonly is used in the field of economics and management science n order to decision making. Here, S stands for “strengths”, W for “weakness”, o for “opportunities” and T for “target”.
The high-paying job offers many advantages that are helpful to supplying my expenses such as tuition fee, transportation fares, costs of clothes, and other daily needs. The high-paying job and affluent me to go to Cinema, Football Stadium, and other entertainments. In short, the low-pay job will deprive me of many things that money could buy.
Besides, in our world high-paying job brings many characteristics such as prestige, attraction, good-manner, lively and even personality. The people have little time to evaluate and think about our lives and they think what they see.
Finally, in the high-paying job, you will obtain more opportunities to bringing the child up with better utilities and sending them to non-profit school.
Sometimes everything seems like a double-edged sword when speaking the strengths and weakness. In the high-paying job, there might be little time to spend with my friends and family, but compared with the strengths and the opportunities mentioned above, it can be ignored.
When the target is overriding factor, you, as a high-paid worker will be more likely to fulfill your target because of the strength of money to come over many problems.
All that I have said above boils down to the conclusion that if you have a choice to opt for the high-pay job or low-pay job you should choose the high-pay job for its ability to make you affluent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, so, while, i think, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19891008174 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40600326974 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2574878646 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.620883264631 0.236089414692 263% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248987547236 0.076458572812 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215161871955 0.0737576698707 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296955934379 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243565544064 0.0645574589148 377% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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