hometown
With the developement of my hometown in the past few years, the population is expanding very
fast. The city is expiriencing not only a higher birthrate than ever, but also waves of immigration.
The streets in the city are crowed or even jamed during the rush hours. If I could change one thing
about my hometown, I would develope an advanced public traffic system.
In order to hold such an exploding population, the city has extended miles by miles without much
plan. It is common for people to travel from the southmost part to the northmost part of the city to
go to work everyday. They have to spend three hours or more on the way they go to work and
come home. Eight hours' work is a heavy burden, while people have to spend hours before and
after the work. A subway running through or around the city can solve the problem. People could
live further away from the downtown without worrying about spending too much time on the way.
Some people buy their own car or take a taxi to work everyday. It's really expensive for most of
the people in the city. They can't afford paying so much on traffic fares. Many civil engineering
experts advocate that sharing a public traffic system is the most efficient way. People could
reduce their fares a lot by using the public traffic system, and they can spend the money on some
other things.
Even there are more and more people who can afford buying a car or taking taxi everyday, It is
still suggested to using the public traffic system. Because the road developement can never keep
up with the demand of the increasing cars, the cars may jam on the roads during rush hours.
Usually, the speed of the car in that time is no higher than a bycicle! And pollution is another
concern. So many private cars running in the city will bring us an environmental problem. On the
other hand, the pollution from the public traffic system is much lighter.
All in all, an advanced public traffic system time efficient, cost efficient, and pollution preventing.
This is the trend of advanced cities.
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- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? 88
- smalltown 70
- hometown 60
- Food easier to prepare 73
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rthmost part of the city to go to work everyday. They have to spend three hours or more...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 54, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...uy their own car or take a taxi to work everyday. Its really expensive for most of the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 30, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r most of the people in the city. They cant afford paying so much on traffic fares....
^^^^
Line 14, column 42, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...he people in the city. They cant afford paying so much on traffic fares. Many civil en...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...are more and more people who can afford buying a car or taking taxi everyday, It is s...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 80, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... can afford buying a car or taking taxi everyday, It is still suggested to using the pu...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25187032419 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.142144638404 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847880299252 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0548628428928 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0349127182045 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112219451372 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0423940149626 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33149880075 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249376558603 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00249376558603 0.00188951952338 132% => OK
Determiners: 0.137157107232 0.0887237588012 155% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0249376558603 0.0209618222197 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00249376558603 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2057.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 365.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63561643836 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293150684932 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186301369863 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117808219178 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0739726027397 0.112833075102 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33149880075 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 54.5303081739 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8695652174 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0556470212 48.84282405 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4347826087 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8695652174 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.644075263715 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.5376344086 485% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 34.4997022037 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.75268817204 1.45489161554 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0296653352716 0.300154397459 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0938237550217 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0937666691898 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.680384017124 0.497263757937 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.303231477745 0.151897553556 200% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146430129108 0.114077575197 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477585545185 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.122209425921 0.336927656856 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0806646777769 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0174633393198 0.210909579961 8% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564414142811 0.0618886996521 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.