Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Cities tend to be big because of the influx of people who move there in search of opportunities. In the past cities were built on the banks of rivers or oceans, this caused them to be important center of trade, commerce and other means of livelihood. People from villages would migrate here in search of a better lifestyle, abundance of food and other amenities. This lifestyle is opposed to that of small towns as townspeople generally live a quiet, simple and peaceful life surrounded by trees and mountains. I personally like the big city life as I was brought up in New York City, a giant metropolis.
Firstly, as a resident of a big city I would like to bring out the abundance of amenities that are not present in towns. Transport is one such amenity, there are buses, trains, taxis, metro cars, etc. that can take you anywhere you want to go in a short amount of time. Cities also have many hospitals that have many doctors that treat even the rarest diseases. In most cities you can find convenience stores every block which makes it easy to live. These are amenities that city folk find to be the norm, that is not that case in small towns where patients have to wait on a single doctor and buses ply once in a blue moon.
Secondly I would point out that cities are lifelines of a country’s economy. Cities have all types of businesses that deal in all types of products. This creates a thirst for man power that cannot be quenched. Small towns may not have the business infrastructure to support its inhabitants who obtain specialized knowledge. This is why many people flock to cities to get a better standard of life and fatter pay checks.
Lastly I would point out that cities also have many flaws. Many people can get burdened by the competitiveness and hustle and bustle of living in a city, this can lead to many health issues like stress and heart disease. Cities are also the largest environmental threats as their businesses spew out many by-products that then in turn create health issues for the people living there.
I personally like cities more than towns because even though cities have many issues I believe that the good points outweigh the negative ones.
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- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 86
- Food easier to prepare 73
- hometown 60
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? 88
- smalltown 70
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274647887324 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.138497652582 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915492957746 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0516431924883 0.046263068375 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0328638497653 0.0685040099705 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1220657277 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0164319248826 0.0351676179071 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.52541550171 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0117370892019 0.00188951952338 621% => OK
Determiners: 0.0845070422535 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234741784038 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0281690140845 0.0139019557991 203% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2213.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 388.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70360824742 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309278350515 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167525773196 0.251872472559 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128865979381 0.174417080927 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0876288659794 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52541550171 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523195876289 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.782027951 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0851770122 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.65 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 36.1525773196 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.85263157895 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247187596216 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0983250445041 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0797512380578 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504273956605 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176412630692 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977880719027 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750467307643 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315663069522 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0512978632155 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147997390812 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087818995315 0.0618886996521 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.