How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
It has been decades since television started changing the way which people behave. Even though some believe that people have started behaving badly, others think otherwise. The latter state that TV has influenced positively. In my opinion, there are positive effects and negative ones made by television on people behavior.
First of all, it is crucial to notice that an actor or actress dictates the fashion. For example, when one celebrity begins using some special outfit,people tend to be dressed accordingly. Therefore, a new fashion develops, which is a good signal for the industry, more specific dresses and clothes are necessary to get at the demand.
However, the same is not true when comes out to the news. Each following day we turn on the TV to watch the world news and what we see it is merely blood flowing around. There are many bad news and parents must watch out their kids because what they see can wound them harshly later on. As one instance, there was one advertisement stating that if we wanted to have a cookie, we should jump from the bridge. Unfortunately, days later one kid died trying to do the same. Thus, attention must be given for news seen on TV.
Furthermore, movies may have the same influence on people's behavior. They can go even further on behaviors. As one example, they can be traumatic on person life, watching horror movies. Or, they can induct a person to become a serial killer.
Finally, as the above stated, movies and television can bring about some benefits, however they can affect badly people's behavior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...lebrity begins using some special outfit,people tend to be dressed accordingly. Therefo...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'blooded'.
Suggestion: blooded
...world news and what we see it is merely blood flowing around. There are many bad news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84644194757 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52182049651 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0070464976 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152295728009 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489781820021 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661144044098 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933850250057 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539910760854 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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