Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Traveling is a great experience because we get to know different culture and different places. Some people prefer having aside a companion, while others had better go alone. I particularly prefer going alone, as I will talk over in the following essay.
First of all, when traveling alone, we have enough time to visit as many places as we want. For example, a museum is necessary the entire day saved to visit it, otherwise is not possible even to start glimpse at it. Perhaps, with a companion, the other want to save time for other kind of entertainement. Therefore, this shows that being alone overdoes with a companion.
Moreover, there is always the possibility at which both parts disagree with visiting a monument in certain time. For instance, while one may prefer to go for a monument, the other might want to go for shopping. This happens most of the time, even if it is scheduled to visit the monument. This is the worse that happens when traveling with a companion. Thus, it is better go alone rather than with a companion.
Furthermore, going alone also overdoes with a companion when the money is not enough. If one is not alone the his/her savings are over, however the other wants more money to buy superfluous stuff, clothes, shoes, etc. As one example, I was traveling with my mother in Paris. We needed to save money to be able to return home but she wanted to buy more clothes than we had already bought. Then, when we are alone, we do not end up fighting for superfluous stuff.
Finally, when we are going alone for a trip, we go unwound and do not fight for anything uninteresting, we have enough time to do whatever we want and we do not have to change plan out of a sudden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...oney is not enough. If one is not alone the his/her savings are over, however the other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54723127036 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57310847503 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8688471217 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198052556011 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780524432381 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609574923716 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124089512011 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518983934147 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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