I m twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than they are today use specific example with reason

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I’m twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than they are today use specific example with reason

There is no shortage of opinion that increasing technology and inventions has made our lives much easier today than it was before .we can’t survive without comforts that we have today specially the modes of transport .keeping in mind the various advantages that cars brings along with them ,I definitely disagree that in the twenty years to come ,there will be fewer cars in than there are today .It’s my firm belief for the number of reasons and i will develop these idea in subsequent passges .
To begin with cars play a vital role in time management.We can easily save our precious time while traveling in cars than in trains or buses as they tend to consume lot of time in process of stopping at stations .Moreover we don’t have to wait for the cars to come and pick us up unlike buses .we can easily manage our travel according to our covience .I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience .I remember ,during initial months of my first job ,i used to travel on bus and I would always end up getting late to my work due to longer and interrupted route that bus would take .Even sometimes I would get scolded by my boss for being late to work .Then after few years of working ,I afforded to buy car for myself which made my life much more disciplined.Similarly,just like me ,many people prefer cars over buses .That’s why I believe in upcoming time ,there would be more cars than they are today.
Secondly, I believe cars provide us with our own personal space than other public transport .we can travel wherever we want without any fear of being judged by someone .In addition to this ,we can carry extra luggage in car according to our choice .Drawing from my personal experience,during summer vacations,I used to travel with my family on train .I always had this inconvenience of carrying only limited luggage .we were never able to enjoy ourselves on train as we were always surrounded by the public .Once I got frustrated of these disadvantages to such point that I decided never to travel on train again .so,it’s clearly certain to see why people love to travel in cars and owing to these comforts ,people buy more cars .
In the light of reasons mentioned ,I strongly disagree that in the coming twenty years cars will be fewer in use than they are today .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, even so, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61298076923 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63861452521 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 20.1344086022 517% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 305.34816194 48.9658058833 624% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 479.75 100.406767564 478% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.0 20.6045352989 505% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 5.45110844103 468% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.5376344086 975% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308876986155 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.284225549915 0.076458572812 372% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186421134586 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284225549915 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186421134586 0.0645574589148 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.3 11.7677419355 444% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.62 58.1214874552 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 10.1575268817 420% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.01818996416 146% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 10.0537634409 434% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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