If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Peoples always attach their with any matter and always decided to do something those are bringing success or any positive outcomes and these outcomes are justifiable always. Although sometimes peoples considered any matters as justifiable only this matter worthy outcome, but I personally disagree with these statements. I believe that always considered and justify any matter, even if this matter brings any zenith result. Therefore, I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the outcome of result of any subject matter not only depends on one of their worthiness, but it is also mean that if the goal is worthy not to consider this blindly. one subject matter depends on various aspects directly or indirectly. In addition, every matter has some consequences, always consider the matter only positive outcomes, it would happen some after serious consequences. For example, personally I want to pursue my Ph.D. from America, that's why I fully dedicated and bring a good result my various my adaptive test and language exam. Although my whole procedure would change to go the USA and starting my academic career but it does not mean that I fully prepare for everything such as environmental conditions, Academic study, other things. Thus everyone should consider not only the specific outcomes, also other things that directly or indirectly related the one specific matter.
Secondly, only justified of worthiness for any subject matter, it is completely attacking decision. Every subject matter have lots of flaws, Although sometimes not to come out the first outcome but would have happened in the later time. For instance, every wining match every format of playing more specifically soccer games like, after the winning coach and player not to enjoy their wine, they also figure out their faults that hade occurred in the match. Though, in particular, match they overcome and get their success, also they try to solve their faults because it would happen the losses their next match.
However, we know that always peoples prefer the result and justified, not to consider the behinds effort, But it does not mean that after worthy outcome to keep their constant. we know that the software company, there are two different types of peoples always work, some people although release their product in the market like Apple companies i-phones but they also continue their programs updated and also provide their customers on to update.
In conclusion, from the above consideration we say that worthiness not the only considerable parameter of justifiable, needed some other considerations matter those are directly or indirectly stimulated the culminity of the matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...omes and these outcomes are justifiable always. Although sometimes peoples considered ...
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Suggestion: One
...is worthy not to consider this blindly. one subject matter depends on various aspec...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...I want to pursue my Ph.D. from America, thats why I fully dedicated and bring a good ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nditions, Academic study, other things. Thus everyone should consider not only the s...
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Line 17, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'behinds'' or 'behind's'?
Suggestion: behinds'; behind's
...sult and justified, not to consider the behinds effort, But it does not mean that after...
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Suggestion: We
... worthy outcome to keep their constant. we know that the software company, there a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29519450801 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61249071577 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508009153318 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3425297713 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.117647059 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764372756995 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308283823178 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040559585084 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425580482468 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251891566222 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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