If i could change one important thing from my hometown, i wish to change the Sterlite (copper extract factory) from my home town. Even though there are many advantages from the factory their also many disadvantages that affect so many people in that particular area and the whole southern region of Tamilnadu.
Firstly, there are many types of pollution which were released from the factory. Air pollution was the big crises in my city it was mostly due to the release of sulpurdioxide to the atmosphere from the factory. One day night me and my friends gone for a ride near the factory, at that night time air contains lots of humidity so one of my friend panic that he got allergy allover his body we also can smell pure sulphuric acid smell at that night time. The above incident shows that, sulphurdioxide reacts with air droplets and forms as week sulphuric acid.
Secondly, another most important crises were scarcity of water due to lack of rain. Unlike other cities my city was full of crops due to the Thamarabarani river which flows through the city. There were no problem in monsoon rain before building the factory. Lack of rain destroys the whole ecosystem of my city, it destroyed more species of birds and large number of crops lost their lives due to nonavailability of water. Also, the toxic gas from the factory reacts with the rain water thus forms into a week acid thereby destroying all types of crops, all species of fishes, coral reefs, even the building.
Thirdly,the worst case and the most dangerous side of the factory is, due to the release of toxic gas it affect the pregnant ladies there by killing or affecting the baby in the womb. Not only the above it also kills many people in the name of cancer.So i insist all the people take some steps to eliminate the factory from the habitable zone, there by we can avoid there types of consequence among public people.
To conclude, because of the above reason and examples provides i would likely to change the factory prom my city and make my city pollution free and make all the people to live a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65498652291 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39164528326 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1366374113 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744755786794 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271658101943 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601941122475 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052909056041 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552004068822 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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