If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.

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If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.

If I get a chance to invent something, surely I will invent robo. Now a days it is very hard to work manually. There are so many

constraints such as time, cost, delay, accurcay.

For example cutting vegetables. If we ask to cut the vegetables to the man as well as robo at a same time with rectangle shape. It is certain

that robo will cut the vegetables in less time as compared to the man with accuracy. So, we can say that robo will do the task of several

men.

As a result I would love to say if I build the robo, my life will become easy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...t something, surely I will invent robo. Now a days it is very hard to work manually. There...
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...mething, surely I will invent robo. Now a days it is very hard to work manually. There...
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...hard to work manually. There are so many constraints such as time, cost, delay, a...
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Suggestion: Constraints
...to work manually. There are so many constraints such as time, cost, delay, accurcay. ...
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...time with rectangle shape. It is certain that robo will cut the vegetables in les...
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Suggestion: That
...with rectangle shape. It is certain that robo will cut the vegetables in less ti...
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...ay that robo will do the task of several men. As a result I would love to say...
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Suggestion: Men
...at robo will do the task of several men. As a result I would love to say if...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227642276423 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.138211382114 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731707317073 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650406504065 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0731707317073 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113821138211 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.00813008130081 0.0351676179071 23% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.33229703522 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.0309702414327 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0894308943089 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0487804878049 0.0209618222197 233% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 561.0 2387.08602151 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 408.028673835 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14678899083 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.48200974243 72% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.201834862385 0.338922669872 60% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.128440366972 0.251872472559 51% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0917431192661 0.174417080927 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0825688073394 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33229703522 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 212.727598566 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.524397521467 124% => OK
Word variations: 53.6536634418 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6684587814 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.625 20.5533526081 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3369089178 48.84282405 46% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.125 120.699889404 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.5533526081 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 26.4690366972 45.7405998639 58% => OK
Elegance: 1.26470588235 1.45489161554 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113385516332 0.300154397459 38% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133402628287 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.150986598687 0.0752933317313 201% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623544493708 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.272968542567 0.151897553556 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586389743144 0.114077575197 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598756982007 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183525290042 0.336927656856 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.138831798857 0.067059652881 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703086053028 0.210909579961 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596768172079 0.0618886996521 96% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8870967742 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 8.42114695341 24% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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