If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire : an experienced worker at a higher salary or inexperienced worker at a lower salary?
If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire : an experienced worker at a higher salary or inexperienced worker at a lower salary?
There are certain consideration of factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine what are the profits of hiring an experienced and unexperienced worker? I certainly believe that the one with a great deal of experience is much profitable because it can offer much higher return. Someone can evidently weigh the pros and the cons of my each reasons. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in details below.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stand point is concerned with this issue that is the experience. Certainly, firms, either who are managed by or has workers with high experience, will lead to companies to gain more income when compared to others’. The best example that fit this notion that a crew of inexperienced doctors, who could not correctly diagnose the illness that is associated with the patient at hospital, subsequently would induce the hospital to lose incoming patients owing to feedback which was expressed by the one who are not satisfied by the service he or she received. Above all, the firm would be stagmitized with negative notion. As a consequently, start to lose the money. It goes without saying that, it is well known fact high experienced worker necessitate a considerable sum of money but returns are satisfying.
Another crucial fact which deserve some word here is that the knowledge experienced individuals possess. It is important to consider that vast amount of the contribution to the company’s growth comes from the ones with high knowledge that sometimes can not be acquired by neither time or experience. It contingents on your background, which is grave factor owing to that when essentials decision ought to be given, which may have potential risk that can impede the growth, can not be given by unqualified workers. For the purpose of the illustration, imagining a company at producing firm, lets’ assume that producing the seals. In the case of any malfunction he/she is encountered such as machine disorder that affects millions of production, where she/he need to solve issue If none are present at factory, what would be the outcome, whereas unexperienced worker, the one with high experience can find a solution such as renting a machine from his/her competitor company. Without a shadow of doubt, it is more beneficial to hire the experienced employees.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discussed above, I am of the opinion that employee with high knowledge and experience are tend to get the company to further as well as improving under any circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
...ails below. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stand point is concerned with this i...
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Suggestion:
...e best example that fit this notion that a crew of inexperienced doctors, who cou...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...a considerable sum of money but returns are satisfying. Another crucial fact which deserve ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontribution to the company's growth comes from the ones with high knowledge ...
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Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
...mes can not be acquired by neither time or experience. It contingents on your back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1059602649 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98201199599 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.206407926 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338822522149 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985319992428 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223476966694 0.0737576698707 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26685486826 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.369165718042 0.0645574589148 572% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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