Without a shadow of a doubt, there are many factors that people should take into account when they behave in front of a public situation. In my opinion, as far as the culture, politeness, and righteousness are concerned, it is my conviction that people should wait for the lecture or meeting over to talk about the mistake with the teacher or leader. I made my position for many rational reasons, and I will illustrate further in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, in some cultures, it will be extremely impolite to point out someone's mistake in public when they are still talking, especially that this someone is your teacher or leader, who you should show some respect. For example, in the workplace, if we interrupt our leader in the meeting, the leader will feel that he was not respected. The consequence of this rude behavior may be adverse to us; the superior may get mad at us or even deliberately ignore our advice in future meetings. Therefore, for our own benefits, we should adequately consider other people's feelings and preserve the self-esteem of those who in a high position.
In addition, talking to others about their careless mistakes in a more private place can promote our relationship with them because they will appreciate the thoughtfulness. I have to admit that my own experience has profoundly influenced my opinion on this matter. Just take the case of my mother, who is a completed career-oriented woman and work in a substantial international company as a counselor. My mother once told me a story about her and her boss when she was a nobody in the company. During an internal meeting, her boss made a mistake of a deductive about a vital result, instead of correcting her boss immediately, my mother choose to send her boss a detailed email explaining her conclusion. As a result, the boss notices my mother's ability to take care of others' feelings and analysis skills. Before long, my mother gets her promotion.
Nevertheless, there still a exist voice that people always have the option to say nothing because it is also polite. However, as I said at the beginning of this article, righteous and integrity matters. You can imagine a society where the mainstream values advocate people to stay silent only for the sake of courtesy; it would be a world full of flattery and hypocrisy. I think we should uphold the culture of bravely pointing out the false in a condition of protecting the dignity of others.
In a nutshell, based on the considerations mentioned above, I maintain that we should raise the mistake after other people leave rather than saying out loud in public or keep quiet about it. Admittedly, I understand that every individual has their own perspective and judgment.
However, I firmly believe that they will compromise after reading my article.
- TOEFL T P O 43 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wait until the class or meeting is o 90
- TOEFL T P O 43 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wait until the class or meeting is o 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r promotion. Nevertheless, there still a exist voice that people always have the...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r promotion. Nevertheless, there still a exist voice that people always have the optio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90775681342 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85386478515 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549266247379 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.354464065 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.476190476 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990472173209 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256132590968 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041479001719 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469413799978 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038099208893 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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