Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that all of aspect of a good education quality do not related to the university professors. And the university managers should be take attention to several different thinghs that can have effect on students abilities. ontrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that if the university mangers can keeping profesors satisfy from their jobs, thus it led to they try in harder and it can significantly improve the educational quality and university ranking uin the world. I, to a great extent disagree with this idea that the universities should spend more money on professors salary.
First and foremost, now the salary of university professors is one of highest salary between all of jobs in the society and most of them are stisfy from their own salary. Therefore, spending more money in this portion cannot solving any of problems. However, the professors works can be more efficiently if thay have more budget for exponding their research projects. In this shape the professors can accept more garduated students and increase their science reports and papers. Under this condition the professors are more satisfy because it increase their produtivity and improved their position in the university. In addition, the universties through raise in number of graduated students and gain in science production can improve their world ranking.
On another significannt fact that should be taken into the cosideraton is that improving the university facilities like lablotory, laibrary and also, improving the quality of buildings ahve very important impact on quality of education. Because the good facilities directly affected on the research results. Furthermore, the tope talented students and researchers just choosce universities with high quality facilities that can cover their needs for their research projects.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that the universities should be spend more money on variety of causes not only salary of professors. Because, improveing the quality of education related to several different thinghs like research fundation and facilities and social progarms.
- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 61
- TPO 39 - integrated writing 3
- TPO 39 - Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 85
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 73
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
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Suggestion: Ontrary
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
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Suggestion: of the highest
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45857988166 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81505882941 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2151887193 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436315955886 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143054143884 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982546779743 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283753687049 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697779902514 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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