Increasingly, robots and computers are being used to do work that humans once had to do for themselves. Some people believe the effect of this change will be mostly positive and helpful for humans. Other people believe that robots and computers will take too many jobs away from humans who are currently paid to do them.
Which view do you agree with and why?
Due to the rapid change of this world, many things have been created thorough the period of the time by human intelligence like technological gadgets, internet, and so forth. However, by the advent of computers and robots, someone thinks that they are really helpful and bring various improvements to our society. while others consider those are the major factor of the increase of unemployment in today.
In my point of view, I personally agree with the latter one for some reasons which will be illustrated in the essay below.
First of all, Nowadays, All of these inventions are gradually being used in so many industries and factories because firstly, by using the machines is much faster and convenient than the hand's works and moreover, the products, manufactured by them, are more qualified and accurate than the human. Needless to say that a large amount of money in the many employers spent on purchasing these machines a lot than in the past. For example, in some countries, the minority of jacket factories rely on using technology as a tool for making a number of a jacket. By touching the screen on the robot to give an order to produce any jackets as their desire. As a result of this change, workers are getting fewer than usual in the future. thus, the cause of a skyrocketing number of employees of industrial jobs for the advent of the machines.
Secondly, It not only affects the industrial site but also transportation, Nowadays, as the advancement of our technology, finally, the non-driver car has been invented by the progression of human intelligence. As a result of this invention has a great impact on taxi drives or even the bus drivers in the future. because it may be likely to be manufactured more and furthermore, it could be affordable for many people in this world. For example, in some countries like Japan, they are inventing many of this type of cars and then there are many experiments for its potential capacity which is really fantastic because, by the means of GPS, it could go along the direction of the GPS gadget installed in the car.
In summary, Computer and technology have influenced our lives a lot in various ways. Especially, the option of jobs will be limited because of increasingly using these machines such as Jacket factory and non-driver car which mostly utilized computer program in there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79123180693 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6565184702 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5625 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236790998839 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676252721685 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546245631639 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124296503104 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229197739862 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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