INDEPENDENT WRITING TASK
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Leadership is an attribute that results in the emergence of great nations. Some people are born leaders while some people think they can learn this attribute by learning. I personally believe that leadership comes naturally because it passes on from generation to generation, and some people fail to acquire this characteristic.
To begin with, I think that leadership is present in the blood of some people. They adopt this attribute from their ancestors naturally. The world is full of that kind of examples where nations got successful with the efforts of their leaders. Moreover, those leaders belonged to the families who had this talent. My country is a compelling example of this. There was a time when my country flourished in every field. The development and prosperity were the blessings of our leaders who possess the natural ability of leading their nation. After a few years, people selected leaders who were inexperienced and no one in their family had the capability of leadership. Those leaders tried to lead the country but failed to run the country because of the lack of leadership qualities. This results my country to be ranked among the poorly developed and unpeaceful countries.
What’s more, some people try to learn this ability, and want to become good leaders. They try their best but still face difficulties in leading others. For instance, when I was in college, our teacher appointed the topper of our class as our leader. His job was to guide us in every matter and helped us in any hard task. He tried a lot but unfortunately he did prove himself as a good leader. Rather than another student with ordinary grades was very good in leadership. He had the natural capability to control the class and take care of all matters. Later on, our professor switched him as the leader of the class.
.In conclusion, I firmly believe that leadership is an attribute that comes naturally; no one can force himself to become a good leader. Most of the countries have good leaders because they are born with this natural attribute to lead their nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66619431697 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8082823473 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0869565217 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149406346047 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455055912135 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276786819903 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100523202517 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206626390631 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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