Individuals can do nothing to protect the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment’s deteriorate now become a more and more serious problem. Some people might complain that the government did not administrate the protection of our environment in a proper way. As for me, I think we can do plenty of things to protect the environment by ourselves.
Individuals can affects other people to protect environment. One person ride bicycle everyday but others still use cars seems useless to protect environment. However, according to a psychology research, people are tending to imitate others when they think others are doing right things. Like if you drop litters to different categories in a proper way, then your aunt sees it, and thinks you are doing right thing to the environment, then she becomes to do this, and she will affects her husband; her friends, etc. Finally, plenty of people can be eco-friendly together. They can use bus together; ride bicycle; use air conditioner in a lower degree, etc. However, not everybody will do protect environment. Maybe they think it is such a trouble, so they will not do this and they will not continue to affect other people, but another experiment shows these people are just few. Fortunately, most people could protect environment.
Furthermore, if people only depend on government to protect our environment, it cannot worth because I think if the government is the leaf of the stem of a tree, then our general public is the roots the government based on common people. Even though a government has made a perfect policy for environment protection but none of the citizens follows it, the policy just a bunch of useless words. After all, I have heard news that a town’s government once made a policy led people protect the water, and prohibited they; especially the manufactory of this town drains sewage to the canals. However, no one followed this policy, every citizen throw litters to the canals, and the manufactories, drains sewage as they did before. As the beginning, the government was try to administrate the citizens and punished them if they obey this policy. But later, because too many people obeyed it, so they gave up. This shows that only masses implement the policy, it can work, so general publics can follow the policy to protect environment.
Anyway, the government and the large companies have the power to force people to follow they policies or rules they made. They can set put a crueler rules to punish people. But, just as the same as the news I mentioned last paragraph. If none of their people follows it, whatever they set up a cruelest rule, they might give up to administrate it finally. Therefore the masses are still significant.
In conclusion, I think individuals can do plenty of things to protect environment not only because the strength of masses is strong but also because individuals can implement the policies. Therefore we should aware to do from ourselves, from the little things around to protect our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion:
... protect the environment by ourselves. Individuals can affects other people to ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ct environment. One person ride bicycle everyday but others still use cars seems useless...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, after all, as for, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00202839757 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8329213595 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0342685066 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9615384615 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272343179585 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868309203286 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793844518892 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165553573861 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728139468706 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.