It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent's jobs than to choose jobs that very different from their parent's job.
In such a sophisticated world, every child has to choose a suitable job regarding his conditions. In this regard, some people are inclined toward the opinion that children should choose the same job as their parents whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. The way I see it, children will be successful if they choose a job that they enjoy and is different from their parents' jobs because it can be beneficial for the person and the society. What follows is the elaboration of my viewpoint.
Every job requires special personality. Regarding the fact that different people with diverse characteristics - including emotional, calm, introverted, extroverted, social, and the like - can cope with specific tasks, children may not be able to do their parents' occupation. Take a child whose mother is a surgeon, for instance. This child is afraid of seeing blood so if his mother encourages him to become a doctor, he will never be a successful and good doctor.
Another important aspect that choosing a favorite job influences on is that the child can always use his initiative. When children opt a similar occupation to their parents, the parents always step in and exhort children to act the same. For example, my friend is a teacher the same as her father. Although my friend believes that rewards are more effective than punishments, her father incites her to punish the students to make them study their lessons. She says that she has lost her creativity since she has selected her father's job.
Besides the aforementioned benefits of opting the interested occupation for people's lives, it should be noted that the society needs particular jobs to develop in each step. Regarding to the history of developed countries, different job positions are required for the countries to improve their social, political and economic conditions. For instance, a job position such as a simple labor is less required compared to a knowledgeable worker in an industrialized country.
Considering the effects of personally selected job on the person's life and the society, it is obvious that children should choose their desired job even different from their parents' job. In fact, children become more creative, work based on their attribute, and are guided into a effective job for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required compared" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'comparing' or 'to be compared'.
Suggestion: comparing; to be compared
...such as a simple labor is less required compared to a knowledgeable worker in an industr...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...fects of personally selected job on the persons life and the society, it is obvious tha...
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on their attribute, and are guided into a effective job for the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'whereas', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227817745803 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.163069544365 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103117505995 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287769784173 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0791366906475 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112709832134 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0455635491607 0.0351676179071 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86287886511 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263788968825 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107913669065 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215827338129 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00719424460432 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2305.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 377.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11405835544 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395225464191 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307692307692 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2175066313 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129973474801 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86287886511 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.3154115394 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9444444444 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6410106606 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.055555556 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 51.7136752137 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.42477876106 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323431300792 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101479201594 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793585008351 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511288868979 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169899075614 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117744974392 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624444867491 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286887621064 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0473125456712 0.067059652881 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215843913147 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395210819591 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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