It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Some people argue that children who raise in a urban environment more well adjusted and equipped with the latest knowledge of advance technologies thus become an urbane person. In the other hand country side offer kids an extensive ground to explore and amiable community to enhance their communication skill. I personally believe children shoud be raised in the rural area for several reason i would like to elaborate.
First, kids who grow up in a countryside supported by varied, extensive, and excellent open space. This is well known fact that there are several activities that implausible to experience without a natural resource such as hiking a moutain, playing canoe, or even forage around the forest. As a result, The experienced flourish their abilities in self sufficient since they must depend on their agility, endurance of their walking even their capability to read map. Additionally, The healthy, less poluted neigbourhood give them a healthier body. Whereas kids in a city most likely crammed into small confining room With only television or internet tonentertained them. This will hindered their gross motoric skill and restric their knowledge about important life skill such as cutting the firewood or simply climb a tree.
Second, children more likely to socially adjusted if they grow up within close-knit community. The amiable people, less hectic schedule and supported ambient make people in a village convene more thus the higher chance to practice the communication skill. Although life in the countriside deprived them interaction witth different culture ornethnics, the sheer number of interface would overcome the problem.
Lastly, the children in a countryside less likely expose to a negative information and influence. The kids in rural area unlikely to take drugs or involved in criminal activities simply becaus there is no access to do so. Eventhough that makes them have less precaution to safety and more lenient to law, from my experience with good parenting they will have significant comprehension about the matter. For example, the father can embedded the importancy of defence art and teach the son to the art. In addition they could emphazie the significant of law so the children shoul abide to it.
Ultimately, kids needs more than just a sophisticated, extravagant, andanve life style. The countryside offer more than city could have. All the things considered, I believe children should be raised in a countryside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...people argue that children who raise in a urban environment more well adjusted an...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...n shoud be raised in the rural area for several reason i would like to elaborate. First, k...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed in the rural area for several reason i would like to elaborate. First, kid...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hinder'
Suggestion: hinder
...internet tonentertained them. This will hindered their gross motoric skill and restric t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ce art and teach the son to the art. In addition they could emphazie the significant of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33759590793 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85307845062 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60358056266 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5006329063 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.35 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102199556249 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342727641526 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039603550185 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059463272274 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192253096691 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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