It is a big adulthood responsibility to manage well their own money. In one hand, there is the temptation to spend it buying things that would make you promptly happy. In another hand, there is the need to safe for future unexpected dispenses or achievements, which I think is the most reasonable option. I will be exploring more about it on the following survey.
Firstly, I think that all the adults should ideally achieve stability in their lives. For stability I mean the arrival at the point that the person had get all the needs to live well, such as having a house, a car, a health insurance. In my opinion, it is the first step before to pass to further goals like having a kid or travelling the world. It is comprehensible to spend a first pay with things that can make people promptly happy, for example, going to a fancy restaurant or buying new clothes and shoes, because it would be a way to celebrate the money earned, kind of giving a gift to yourself. However, it should not be a habitude, otherwise, either the person has to work each time harder to sustain this level of expanses, either the person will not be economic stable.
Secondly, it is very important to have savings for unexpected dispenses. We are never expecting an accident or be badly surprised with a broken roof after a thunder, for example. But everybody is susceptible to this kind of events and it is better to be financially ready to cover the expenses. It is known that hospital costs are very elevated and it is not everything covered by the health insurance. For this reason, it is indispensable to safe some money whereas health is not something that should be neglected.
Thirdly, it is good to have savings for future projects. Some people dream of having kids, others dream of travelling around the world. All these projects will require a big amount of money. It is good to work and enjoy the money that you earned, but it is even better to have enough money to be able to realize these kinds of dreams.
Thus, I strongly believe that it is necessary to save some money. In a wide range of ways we will need to spend a bigger amount of money that we use to, such as buying a house, unexpected dispenses as health problems or house reparation and for future projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...rrival at the point that the person had get all the needs to live well, such as hav...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...rrival at the point that the person had get all the needs to live well, such as hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, i mean, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56723716381 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59019655439 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9965440005 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223506528054 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657727903392 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602812956955 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131525863281 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638396814221 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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