Essay topics:
t has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
In this fast growing world, industrialization and educational advancement have taken a major role. Considering learning plays an significant role in our life so, every one has to put the effort to raise the standard educational system. As far as I conserned, I strongly support the idea about building a new high school in my community due to two main reasons I will explain in this essay.
To begin with, population's ratio increased drastically. We need new high school to be build to get the advantages
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...major role. Considering learning plays an significant role in our life so, every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 422.0 1977.66487455 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 86.0 407.700716846 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.04526164648 4.48103885553 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14444061168 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 212.727598566 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.767441860465 0.524837075471 146% => OK
syllable_count: 134.1 618.680645161 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9569768626 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142628617981 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680227607377 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715862268761 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109675952936 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00479621573989 0.0645574589148 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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