Happiness was always a tricky question for all human beings. Most people think that success is not always the main goal in life, and the way you can feel happy and stay positive toward the future contains more value. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and believe that life should be enjoyable rather than just pursuing goals. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if you feel satisfied and happy every day, you will have a healthier body. It means, focusing just on the goals can be harmful in long term. Also, this belief can bring a lot of pressure and stress for us which is a crucial reason for most of the diseases that we are facing in our lives, mentally or physically. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was younger, I always think that I can't be happy in my life unless I stay top rank in everything. I was forcing myself all the time to just study without any breaks because I was thinking that rest is something redundant that slows me down. This attitude caused several problems for me after two or three years. I was turned into a stressed person who was filled with anxiety all the time, and also, I was losing weight too because I didn't have a good appetite. I would injure myself if I didn't stop my way of living.
Second, you should learn to use every single day of your life because they may not back again. In another word, people who just focus on catching goals may lose many moments of their life unconsciously. In fact, they are just trying to catch something imaginary for being happy while they don't know happiness doesn't relate to a specific thing. Moreover, they can become depressed if they can't meet the requirements that they have defined for themselves. For example in our life, some of the events are so unique that may not happen again such as hanging out with family members. Most of the time, we satisfy ourselves with words such as the family always exists and we should just focus on our work, while they are not always alive and present. Maybe in the future, we have to live far from each other so might always regret the moments that we could have together.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we should see happiness in every day of our lives and not limit it to just particular achievements. This is because of living healthier and because of not losing the moments of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, as for, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53181818182 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34423417864 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515909090909 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5552183754 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190175288536 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565726038673 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439420385494 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129770940296 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402224361315 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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