It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and
contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your
opinion, which source is more important? Why?
People always are learning and practicing through their whole lives. From reading
words in textbook such as toy, car, train etc., people have the concept and ideas. They
further understand the actual meaning of these words by playing toys and riding or driving
cars, trains etc.
Education (books) and experience are the main two channels for People to gain their
knowledge. Each plays different roles for people. In my opinion, knowledge from
experience is more important than that from books.
Experience first can prove if the knowledge formbooks are true or false. Textbooks are
very wonderful in teaching people essential principles, how is the world looks like? What is the basic law of change of people and things? We can learn a lot through primary
school, secondary school until university. However, people can only understand the really
meaning of those form books and justify them if they are right through practices. A few
hundred years ago, people learnt from textbook that the earth was flat. However scientists
found that was wrong through observations and measurement.
The knowledge from experience can improve and advance The world and our society. As
books have limitation, they only teach us what people found in the past. The knowledge
from the books are constrained to the certain conditions and environment. For example,
mould and tools design for plastics industry, the university course only taught me very
simple cases, most knowledge is obtained from various different and complicated cases in
my career.
There are a lot new inventions and new products, which could not be found from
textbooks. Our society and world are developed through continuous practices, those
knowledge, never found in books, such as internet, e-business etc. are all developed
through new practices.
"The truth comes from practices and experience", people are continually discovering new
things and assessing the creditability of the knowledge written in books. The knowledge
from experience helps us much more than those from books.
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- It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare andcontrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In youropinion, which source is more important? Why? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 22, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...developed through continuous practices, those knowledge, never found in books, such as internet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, second, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47987616099 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70199719664 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3919811273 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4545454545 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267042918477 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815362280642 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106343580424 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821650611973 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896861587079 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.