It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
Today there is no shortage of debate that building a new high school in my neighborhood is an extremely bad idea. A lot of my neibors are strongly convinced that new school has a lot of disadvantages, they think that there will be a lot of noise from children. But, I disagree with this point of view, and I suppose that new high school will have a lot of benefits for my community.
Firstly, it will be beneficial for students to go to the school, which will be near with their homes. It is common knowledge that it is quite dangerous for student to go tho the school, which is too far away from their houses, because there are a lot of roads, and this fact are able to lead to some awful consiquvencies, for example, car accidents. Moreover, there are not some high schools in my and nearest communities, so now children have to use buses or taxi to go to the school. According to my friend experience, she lives in my neiborhood, she does not have an opportunity to use taxi or buses, due to her financial problems. So, my friend are always go on foot to the school. but unfortunately, some days ago she has experienced a car accident, when my frend cross the road. And now, she has a lot of injuries, but all of this would never happened if there were some schools in my community.
Secondly,there are a lot of school projects, which are able to make a community better. A large quantity of people say that if new school is build there, there will be a lot of noise and mess produced by children and teenagers. But it goes without say that there are a large number of projects and tasks, whose aim is to clean the community near the school. Furthermore, there are also some green days, which make a neiborhood not only clean, but also environmental friendly. According to me personal experience, when I was in a high school, my class always had a lot of tasks to make a community better. For example, once we cleaned the streets and pick up rubbish. In addition, I suppose that we made our neiborhood the better , when it used to be.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, it goes without say that different people have a different points of view, but I strongly convinced that new high school in my community will be a good idea, because it will help to prevent some accident and will make my neiborhood better.
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- TPO48 Integrated Writing 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 660, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...cial problems. So, my friend are always go on foot to the school. but unfortunatel...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...nd are always go on foot to the school. but unfortunately, some days ago she has ex...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ome schools in my community. Secondly,there are a lot of school projects, which are...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... But it goes without say that there are a large number of projects and tasks, whose aim is to cle...
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Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...clean, but also environmental friendly. According to me personal experience, when I was in a hi...
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Line 4, column 729, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e that we made our neiborhood the better , when it used to be. By the way of co...
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Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'point'?
Suggestion: point
... that different people have a different points of view, but I strongly convinced that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i suppose, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44315545244 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69192859349 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447795823666 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2497019544 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.388888889 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135212625002 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540998587844 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370337315806 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952525117297 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286015356109 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.