People in my neighborhood do not usually go out. Most of my neighbours believe that the neighborhood itself is boring and has little to offer in terms of entertainment which is why i almost never see any of them. However, having a movie theater built in it may shift things in a better way in terms of entertainment value and social interaction.
While the few neighbours i have met over the last couple of years are pretty shy, they do have a tendency to go out and distract themselves with almost anything they find. On the other hand, the rest of them are always locked in their houses and are rarely seen out because of boredom. A movie theater would shake things a little by introducing movies of different genres, for any type of people, as a mean to get people excited and finally motivate them to get out in search of something new. Moreover, since the theater would be near them, they would not have to worry about travelling expenses which is not only a huge advantage, but also a huge relief since most of the movie theaters are outside the city.
Since social interactivity is something lacking around the block, having neighbours go to the movie theater would mean that more of them can meet each other and make friendships not only between them but also with people from other neighborhoods or even cities boosting their social live. My uncle is a very compelling example of what i mean. Because all of her favorite places are far from where she lives, she has nothing to do on weekends. However, when a movie theater was built around her neighborhood she found a reason to go out. Once there, she met a friend from school who my uncle had not seen in 2 decades and found out she was actually living in her neighborhood, but because of her low will to go out, she never noticed.
In conclusion, i believe having a movie theater built in my neighborhood can bring life, interactivity and entertainment to a place that has never had it, making these people come together not only as neighbours, but as friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, i mean, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58241758242 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6186723264 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497252747253 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3282220085 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127111595469 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540639507269 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418207019723 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886754039501 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195196755542 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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