While many people believe that there should be restrictions for younger children to watch television, i firmly believe that it should not be forbidden to them because of all the advantages it can bring with.
In recent years, television networks have made programs exclusively for younger audiences in hopes of delivering not just something entertaining for them to watch, but also to serve them as a learning tool. Channels made for children like Disney kids, offer a wide range of programs that have educational purposes without leaving the entertainment value behind.
Additionally, these programs are often made to boost certain qualities of a child, like their creativity.I have recently experienced this with my son. A couple of weeks ago i found my 3 year old son drawing a house from watching a program called Art attack, when a host would teach the kids how to make certain artistic things like pictures or statues. using pencils, markers and other objects commonly found in the house.I was impressed, for i had never thought a television program would be able to teach a kid how to draw and express himself better than his school could ever have.
Likewise, in an age where young kids are being drawn more to technological objects such as cellphones and tablets as oppose to more traditional activities like playing outside or even spending time with their parents, televisions can be an optimistic alternative for parents and children to consider when spending time together in favor of parent and son bonding.
Television has never seen like a viable option for kids to see, especially the younger ones, but in the times we live in, it has made itself accesible for all types of people of all ages, including the small children, granting a number of benefits in educational and parental values.
- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 65
- Do you agree or disagree: students are more influenced by their teachers than by theri friends. 76
- TPO 08 agree or disagree: television advertising directed towards young children (age two to five) should not be allowed. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04966887417 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72876011196 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5437592376 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.625 100.406767564 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 20.6045352989 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111022754001 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486313865411 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457455527172 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694598245739 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439485208498 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 11.7677419355 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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