It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Restaurants are the place where people go to eat delicious food or to meet with their friends. In my neighborhood, there is only one restaurant and it does not provide good quality food. I strongly support the announcement that a new restaurant should build in my community and here are my just justifications.
Firstly, a new restaurant will provide the job opportunity for the local residents. The restaurant would require waiters, chef and accountant and so on. As a result, local residents, who are not able to get a job for their survival, can easily get the job there. For example, in my neighbourhood, there are a lot of people came from their villages to find a job. A new restaurant will help them to get the job there. Thus they can financially support their families.
Secondly, a restaurant would bring the joy and happiness. As I live too far from the main city and there is no option available to spend good times with friends or family. Hence, we need to go to the main city and it takes a lot of time to travel. A new restaurant will provide the great environment to spend the time. We can talk to our friends while enjoying the food and even sometimes we can meet new people. As a result, this will be very happening.
Thirdly, we can have a variety of food in a restaurant. A new restaurant would make it famous by offering a good quality of food and multiple options. Sometimes when people come from the office and they do not want to eat at home, so they can go to the restaurant and can find a lot of options according to their requirements. A restaurant will give a lot of advertisements and hence a lot of people will come there.
In conclusion, considering all the benefits a restaurant offers, I support the proposal to build a new restaurant. Whereas, some people think that it will create a lot of noise and traffic in our neighborhood. Still, I reinforce the idea due to it's advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57060518732 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86825614939 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466858789625 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2012875321 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0909090909 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131580314094 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452684561362 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404554994188 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832780527774 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262068458656 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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