It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends?
As a person reaches adulthood, he needs to make a balance about the non material things that has reached. one of the more important things to have is friendship. Even though the vast majority of people could agree that making new friends is the most important asset, in my opinion it is even more important to keep your old friends, because they have been with you for years, also because the more last a friendship the more strong is, and finally, because you do not know if you will ever find another friend.
First, your friends have already been with you. Whatever you want to name this concept, your old friends have spent time with you that means they have demonstrated that you are important for them. So they are likely to accept your virtues and mistakes more than new friends.
Second, time feeds a friendship. Either positive or negative, all the time spent with your friends counts and makes friendship stronger. Moreover, all the experiences gained along years can contribute to make feelings deeper.
Finally, are you going to find new friends? There is a time in our life when people is innocent, transparent and good; Usually that time happens when we are in school, later people begins to be interested in other things such as money, reputation or work. In addition, i think that making new friend is released to a second layer. Keeping this train of thinking, i think that having new friends is more complicated when we get older, so there is no certainty that we will be able to find a new friend. For example, I have ten friends, and I meet eight of them at school and only two in my work.in summary, friendship has to be cultivated, for that you need time, to share experiences and to take care or your old friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61935483871 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41820187581 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.6508396137 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39141515994 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142382793561 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988959794927 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241382217766 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497775883847 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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