It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Nowadays, communication with other people especially friends plays a substantial role in our lives. Therefore, there is a hot debate about whether it is better to keep our old friends or make new friends. I personally subscribe to the view that it is more advantageous to hold a durable relationship with old friends mainly because trusting to other people is not convenient now and old friends can be as a sturdy support for us in facing huge problems and talking with old friends and reviewing the old recollection is very attractive for everyone. In-depth discussion on each of the abovementioned reasons is presented below.
First and possibly the most important reason why I believe today’s relying on different people is not comfortable for everyone and in many situations has an annoying effect on people exclusively families. In fact, with the advancement of technology, finding new friends has been very easy for people in the social network but everyone is not reliable. For this reason, I strongly believe that splitting hair’s in choosing friends can be a key factor in the progress of people.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that only old friends can be as lasting support for people in confronting with arduous problems. It is due that fidelity of people examines in the challenging situations and usually the endurance of old friends is praisable in supporting another. My own experience is also a compelling example of this. when I had a big problem in the Static exam. My close friend became a volunteer to teach an important parts of this lecture without any assertion to I could pass this exam while my classmates promised to help me but neither of them did not support me.
There is a further more subtle word we must consider, which is the fact that confabulation with old friends and reviewing the old recollection is very amazing for us and absolutely continuing of these conditions increases the chance of having very happy life in a long time. For instance, I had very impressive moments when reviewing the old memories with my dear friends and those times I sense which I am very lucky and this hope gives an incredible energy to me.
In a word, by taking all the aforementioned reason into account, I believe that keeping old friends is intellectual for everyone. This is primarily due to the facts that keeping old friends is very logical instead of trusting to other people and old friends could be strong support for everyone in anytime and talking with old friends about old memories is very pleasant for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
...e is also a compelling example of this. when I had a big problem in the Static exam....
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...e is also a compelling example of this. when I had a big problem in the Static exam....
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Suggestion: part
...ecame a volunteer to teach an important parts of this lecture without any assertion t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...memories is very pleasant for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93378995434 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88339894768 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6776464496 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0625 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34393791509 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126238573483 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101439992898 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216392048351 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096261181084 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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