It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Friends are one of most imperative part of anyone's life. They are the ones with whom we share our miseries and happy moments. Almost anyone's life without good friends would be incomplete. The reading here states that it is important to keep your old friends than it is make to new friends. I partially agree with this claim and feel that it is importnat to keep your old friends along with the new friends that one make.
First, it is important for one to keep one's old friends. They are old friends because they already know and understand you better. In addition to that we have a lot memories with them. For instance, let us take an example of my old friend who knows me very well. That is, particulary how would I feel when I am sad and what kind of things I prefer to do when I am sad. Since, he knows that I prefer going to coffe shop whenever I feel sad he takes me to the coffe shop at that moment which relaxes me a bit. This example illustrates how an old friend who knows you better can soothe you when you are sad. Hence, it is very important to keep your old friends with you.
Second, making new friends is very important as one would learn a lot of new things from them. In addition to learning one will get different view of some things after making new friends. For instance, when I wanted to research about cloud computing in my college I was very afraid of the complexities involved in it until I met a new friend who had a very good understanding of cloud computing. He completely changed my perspective towards the research in cloud computing by explaining the important things in it and how one can start research on it with these minimal things. Thus, this example of mine illustrated how one can learn new things from friends and how it can change one's perspective towards different things in world. Hence, it is imperative to make good friends
In conclusion, I feel that one should neither ignore their old friends nor they should stop from making new friends. It is important to strike balance between making new friends and keeping old friends which will help them learn new things as well keep the people that you are more comfortable with with you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 28.8173652695 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 400.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.475 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3783187339 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59920159681 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.96107784431 262% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9405882317 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.70786347227 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.20758483034 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490488284092 0.218282227539 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186627053401 0.0743258471296 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181512736766 0.0701772020484 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361537530937 0.128457276422 281% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130454056377 0.0628817314937 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 48.3550499002 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.5979740519 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.32208582834 75% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 98.500998004 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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