It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Do you agree?
In this modern era, one can quickly aware of every event occurring around the world. While some people believe that if events happen in the words which not relate to their daily life, it is not in their business, I firmly disagree. In my opinion, individuals should be aware of the accident and events which happen in the world, for two main reasons. I will illustrate this in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, whenever people aware of events that are happening throughout the world, they can gain the experience that helps them in daily life. To clarify my reason, by improving the technology and occur of the internet, people of all around the world can know about the events, so they can understand whenever these events happen for them, what should they do. Individuals must know everything can happen for anybody, and they should be careful about news and learn how to behave and act when do events occur. For example, imagine that somewhere an earthquake happens and destroy lots of buildings and kill many people if other people assume that this disaster unlikely to occur in our region, they cannot be aware of how to manage this critical situation and how can survive. Therefore, it is vital for everyone informed of events.
Secondly, by being aware of events in the world, even if it is not related to people’s life, folks should help each other and be kind. In other words, humans live with using a sense of humanity and kindness, without having emotion and helping each other, people are not disparate from animals. Furthermore, the more humankind aware of news, the more they can help others deal with issues. For instance, I received news that baby needs specific nutrients for growing bone. Although I am a single girl, and these kinds of news do not affect my daily life, I conveyed this information to my sister. Since I am human and I want to help her, I said to my sister.
To sum up, I assume that whenever events happen in the world, even if it does not affect people’s daily life, people should know about events. Not only can individuals gain experience in how they should act in a similar situation, but also they feel brilliant by helping others. As for this writer’s advice, I urge greater cooperation among governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...p others deal with issues. For instance, I received news that baby needs specific...
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... want to help her, I said to my sister. To sum up, I assume that whenever events...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81472081218 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50885853547 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2412307301 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287771778413 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955688733863 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877415655085 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192308695541 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559247394853 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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