asteroids
The reading and lecture are both about whether making colonization on an asteroid is a practical method, or it is a better way to form the colonize of humans on a Moon or Mars. The passage presents three explanations to posit why asteroid colonization is not a profitable way. The professor, however, refutes all of those explanations.
To begin with, the author of reading claims that due to the fact that asteroids have gravity less than Moon or Mars, it is a proper land for colonizing. Nevertheless, the professor opposes this claim by mentioning that living in the law gravity land have a plethora of risking for human; include losing muscle and decreasing in a bone density. Moreover, he states that even living in a low gravity land has a negative compact on people. Therefore, after a few months, they can suffer health problems, so this place is not an efficient location for the colonizing of creatures.
Secondly, the article posits that asteroids are a vast source of raw material, and it is a castable way if humans exploit valuable metals from asteroids. However, the professor maintains on the opposite opinion that mining from asteroids is not a profitable way because transporting minerals from asteroid to earth is high, and there is no grantee the price of material remains high. Maybe by adding material from the asteroid to ground, destroying the market price of metals.
Third, the reading mentions that sometimes asteroids come near our planet, so asteroid is adjacent to earth and be accessible instead of Moon or Mars, which are far away. The professor, however, casts doubt on this claim by stating that I agree by the claims that asteroid may be easy to reach, but it is not easy to return. Also, he says that asteroids travel through space in an unusual way; it is possible at first near to our planet but not stay. Therefore, go farther away and somehow farther than Mars and Moon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l method, or it is a better way to form the colonize of humans on a Moon or Mars. The passag...
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Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d colonization is not a profitable way. The professor, however, refutes all of thos...
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Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unusual way" with adverb for "unusual"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ays that asteroids travel through space in an unusual way; it is possible at first near to our pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8358662614 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68325884885 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.436316063 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37300977388 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135262708259 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108807721596 0.0662205650399 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233620137504 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101578354263 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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