Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
In the contemporary era education is one of the most important matter to consider about. And crucial elements of education system are teachers, so we have to consider them as a important people for our community. Plethora of people believe that in past they were more appreciated and valued by others. However, some people hold opposite opinion, they think they are considered enough these days. Personally I believe in latter point of view. Among countless reasons, which can vindicate my view point, I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following pragraphes.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue is the fact that nowadays, you have to be the best in your career to be successful person and earn sufficent money. Teachers are no exception, therefore, in my opinion, who has enough ability and be expert in his occupation can and must be able to be prosperous person. These days I think we have many teachers, the number is increasing termondously, but not all of them have significant quality for being a good teacher and because of that some of them is not valued among other people.It is because of their lake of knowledge. In past, the educational person with great degrees began their jobs as a teacher but these days most of the individuales who can not apply for engineering programs at the university start their lessons in teaching courses, so there are few well-educated teachers. However, I know many great teachers who is appreciated by everybody. I have a cousin who studys at the high school, he has chemistery teacher who is great in chemistery, he has learned a lot from him and all of the students’ parents praise him for his knowledge and mothod of teaching. So it is not true that people do not value the teachers it is about teachers quality that is dicreasing these days.
Secondly, in past teachers teached pupils with their heart, incomes are not very much but since they loved their job they did it in the best way with limited salary. Nonetheless, nowadays teachers only consider money and they do not have any olbligation and responsibility about their job. For example, these days if somebody does not have money to pay a teacher nobody teaches him but there was not the same in past, I remember in my class they are two student who have great tallent but did not have any money because they came from poor family who have not father and their mother had to work to feed them.our teachers decided to teach them freely and it is interesting that those two persons now have big company with a great number of employee and build a charity in the name of on of our teachers, Mr. Zandi Nejhad. We can conclusion from this experience being appreciated is not about the society it is personal it is about the persons manner and if somebody has good temper, anybody are consider him as a great person and value him a lot.
To make a long story short, based on the afarementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that these days nothing is changed except peoples manner so if anybody wants to consider as a good pesron and be appreciated by others they have to act in a way to brings him, and it is not important in with era do you live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2663.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66374781086 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64247845039 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4588441331 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.0 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.506693902 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.944444444 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7222222222 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197949660206 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748362024162 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100876563653 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114127625759 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425567335312 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.