It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Nowadays, jobs occupy a considerable part of our time. Whether the short-time job is seen as successful plan for companies or not depends on the lens through which one is looking. Therefore, there is a widely held view among people that it is more convenient and useful for employees to possess a short time work where they work only four days. However, I personally sunbscribe to this view that having a job where people work three days a week for long hours mainly because people can spend more time on their families, and also the operation cost will reduce in the companies. In-depth discussion on each of the abovementioned reasons is presented below.
First and possibly the most important reason why I believe that it is better for people to have a job where they work only three days is that they can allocate more time to their families, hence families will create an appropriate place for their children to be able easily live. In fact, governer and ruler in every conutry have to make a wise decision to create best environment for the progress and growth of children. According to a recent survey by local famous newpaper in our country, parents who assign signifacnt time to spend with their children reduce the number of crime and corruption in the society. For this reason, I strongly believe that rulers have to enact the laws that people can spend more time with their families.
There is a further subtle word we must consider, which is the fact that the total costs of companies can be reduced, if they have more off-days in the their weekends. Actually, today the crisis of energy creates more demands to solutions that governers should fulfill to reduce the cost of their operation such as the cost of water, electricity , etc. My own experience is a also compelling example of this. I remember that my country had faced with the shortage of energy in 2010. As a result, our president decided to reduce the work days to decrease the needs for energy. Accordingly, I think that governments can avoid any shortage in energy, if they reconsider the days of work.
In a word, by taking all of the aforementioned reasons into account we may draw a conclusion that it is more interesting and attractive for workers to have a job where thay work only three days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'create the best'.
Suggestion: create the best
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... reduced, if they have more off-days in the their weekends. Actually, today the crisis of...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n such as the cost of water, electricity , etc. My own experience is a also compel...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...days of work. In a word, by taking all of the aforementioned reasons into account we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i think, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56895380161 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5225 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0514422912 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349396394529 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110674720575 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102899305472 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235454229043 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722561014351 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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