It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours
than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours
Over the past years, the issue of whether or not job seekers prefer to have a job that works three days a week with long hours or works five days a week with shorter hours has received a great deal of attention from employers and workers. Although some may say that working less time duration with more days has a great efficient; I, as well as many others, believe that working in three days with long hours makes a lot of free time for workers that have great opportunities for them.
First of all, an important reason why a career that needs shorter workdays is the better option is that a job worker has adequate free time for consuming with families and doing their pleaser activities. People need to spend time with family members such as friends, children and wife for improving mental health. In this situation, since workers have four days of free time, they can schedule for joining a party, going to tripe, and helping children for doing the homework. Furthermore, besides having free time, people can join the sports club or physical activities. By doing sports not only improving physical condition but also improving mental condition.
Another reason for this point of view is that by having adequate free time people would increase the financial situation. Most humans want to have a second job for improving their financial condition, but they do not have enough time to spend on it. Since people have free time, they would schedule for aims and they will become a flourishing person in future. Also, they go to the special classes that related to the second jobs. Furthermore, people can continue their education at the university and following their educational aims.
Finally, it is occasionally said that by finishing their job at the during a day time, people minds become free for rest of the day. When workers have a long duration of time working during a day, they may finish their duties at the deadline, and they do not need to spend time on other days. If workers cannot finish their duties, their mind becomes busy rest of the day, and as a result of it, they would become overwhelmed. This may make people become a depression or anxiety. However, they finish their work; they would not have to overthink their jobs.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that people are living happier and more satisfied when they must only work 3 days a week than another group chiefly due to different improvement in their lifestyle which is resulted from their jobs situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Line 6, column 351, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d they will become a flourishing person in future. Also, they go to the special classes t...
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Line 6, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and following their educational aims. Finally, it is occasionally said that by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85193621868 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43501260319 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478359908884 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4141837226 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3888888889 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314389559703 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107108652266 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105896144533 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200609369114 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12433788073 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.