As the modern era we live in today, there are myriad types of jobs, and the working hours per week can be quite flexible thanks to the advanced technologies and novel digital devices. In my view, I would rather have a job working shorter hours for five days a week. My point of view is based on social, psychological, and economic aspects which I will explore in the following passages.
Psychologically, people have limited time of concentration on one specific task given in a fixed time span. What I want to emphasize is that it is not efficient to work long hours since the productivity would fall as the time goes by. Drawing the example from my own experiences: I sometimes have meetings for group projects with my schoolmates, and one significant observation of mine is that once we spend too long on one issue, we are less likely to figure out a perfect solution or answer efficiently since someone will start to bring about some irrelevant topic to distract others unintentionally. I believe the same rule can apply to working environment.
Socially speaking, because most of the friends of my same age work regular hours, it will be hard to hang out with friends on working days even if I don't have to work. Moreover, my parents are rather conservative, and this can translate to their perception that I am not hardworking and responsible enough as an employee once they know about the fact that I only work three days a week without taking in my explanation.
From economic perspective, working five days a week is definitely helpful for me to save because I would be eager to plan trips and spend time on leisure activities if I had four days off a week. Spending more days but shorter hours at the office per week will restrain my desire to travel regularly due to the fatigue from every working day, and I'll probably want to have simple dinner with friends or even just chill at home after work. In this way, I will shorten the time to save the amount that can achieve my life goals.
To sum up, working on long hours for five days a week is beneficial for high productivity, is persuasive for your parents and friends to trust your ability and responsibility at work, and is an efficient way for not to over spend your saving. As a consequence, I personally favor working five days a week.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... with friends on working days even if I dont have to work. Moreover, my parents are ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...the fatigue from every working day, and Ill probably want to have simple dinner wit...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62378640777 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75453143824 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0113008712 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398541099924 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154715126585 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133352578055 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243216183929 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780128997123 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... with friends on working days even if I dont have to work. Moreover, my parents are ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...the fatigue from every working day, and Ill probably want to have simple dinner wit...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62378640777 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75453143824 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0113008712 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398541099924 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154715126585 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133352578055 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243216183929 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780128997123 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.