Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
work is fundamental part of our lives. Its often determines our level of succes. No matter what we do or where we are, we cannot escape our job duties. Some people believe that its imprtant to be able to work as individual because most jobs work inedenpendly, While other people disagree. In my view, even though both skills are important, the ability work in a group is much more important job skills for many reasons.
First, you can improve your personality and learn so many imprtant skills than you work alone. When you work in a company or a firm, you always have to learn to work with a group of people in order to get job done perfectly, and in a short manner of time. For instance, I have been working at CVS pharmacy 6 months ago. When I started working, I wasn’t really aware of how the job work flow is done there. For the reason that, this was my first job since I came in the united states. During the trainee period, I faced so many difficulties, one very importan is how to communicate effectively with patients. I didn’t realize at first that I’m having this porblem, however, I learned this from my team. So, one of them started to teach me how to introduce myself properly, and how to engaged with customers, or patients properly. It was very helpful for me and finally, I could break the ice with people and become more social and active. On the hand, In my home town, I was used to work independent for 2 years ebfore I came to the United States. All these years, I was not able to find this problem for the reason I was working alone. As you can see, being able to work with group of people on a team is much more important and bebnficial than work independently.
Second, you can do more job when you work in a group. When you work in agroup, the job would be responsible for a part of the job and the other group members would be responsible for other parts, in other words, the job would spilts betweeen the team. For example, I will use the same example, but for diiferent approach, Every week, my manager set up meeting for the pharmacy staff to do job objectives for the week. LAst week, my task was that I had to make a fuill list of medications that have the latest expiration dates. Since we have in the pharmacy thousand of medications, my boss asked one of my co-worker to help me do the list too, but on different section of medications. After that, my co-worker and I were sat together to combine our list with a comprehensive full report then we sent it to our manager. this task had only took from us 2 days to complete it. However, If I would have been to do this objective alone, I would not have been able to do so in this short period of time, in addition to the list was so perfect and precise. This experience taught me that working independenlty is no longer being important and effective anymore.
In short, the ability to work in a group of people is far more improtant than work as individual. Today, most jobs consider working in a group is one of top list job skills. Not only does improve your personalitiy, but also it makes you completed your jobs effectively and in ashort manner of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Work
work is fundamental part of our lives. Its o...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a short manner" with adverb for "short"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...in order to get job done perfectly, and in a short manner of time. For instance, I have been work...
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Line 3, column 990, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
...ve. On the hand, In my home town, I was used to work independent for 2 years ebfore I came t...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have the latest expiration dates. Since we have in the pharmacy thousand of medi...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...n dates. Since we have in the pharmacy thousand of medications, my boss asked one of my...
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Suggestion: This
... report then we sent it to our manager. this task had only took from us 2 days to co...
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Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...t it to our manager. this task had only took from us 2 days to complete it. However,...
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Line 5, column 890, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...us 2 days to complete it. However, If I would have been to do this objective alone, I would not...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o this objective alone, I would not have been able to do so in this short period ...
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Line 5, column 985, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... have been able to do so in this short period of time, in addition to the list was so perfect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 587.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39352640545 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51851566534 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446337308348 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8385266359 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9310344828 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2413793103 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13793103448 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308334828079 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956663029142 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989231458751 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218325945621 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670183413808 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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