Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology has a significant influence on our lives. Today, we use technology on almost every aspect of our daily lives and obviously we cannot avoid its influence anymore. One very important example is computers. Some people believe that computers have made our lives more complex and stressful, while others disagree. In my view, though purchasing and maintaining computers are somehow expensive, computers have created a better quality of lives for many reasons.
The first reason is that computers get us a way of get information through the internet. One of so popular way to get information is by using a personal computer. Moreover, the personal computer provides us with so many options through its software and applications. For example, I have working as trainee in one of health care facility since 3 months. One of the job training duty is to do a seminar for any subject that assigned by my manger. Even though I come back from work at 6 PM every day, I did not face any difficulties to get the information that I am needed for the job. Because of my laptop gives me the opportunity to get access to the internet and searching for multiple sources that I could use it in doing my job. In addition to, When I download that necessary information, I can have organized and arranged it accurately and plainly by using one of the computer’s application. And finally, If I need to print it out, I could do so easily. On the other hand, If the computer does not exist in my life, I would have to go to library to looking for books or articles. Which is totally inconvenient. As you can see, computer has provided us with unlimited resources of information at any time, or any place comfortably and so simple than it was before.
The second reason is that computers have improved the quality of our health. Today, health care providers have used computers in recording, monitoring, and even dispensing medications to patients that resulted in minimizing medications errors, and provide the ability for physicians and pharmacies to follow up patients status. For instance, last year, I worked as a pharmacy technician in a Walgreens pharmacy. When I started working at first, I was overwhelmed by how much computers have involved in the pharmacy work flow. I informed later that by using computers in the pharmacies, medication errors have been minimized tremendously. In other words, using computers helped pharmacists and physicians to improve and ensured that patients got the right medication. Therefore, I was using computer during my work in the pharmacy: in the prescription entry into the system, and reviewing the patient history records, and finally dispensing the medication. This experience taught me that computer plays a crucial part in the pharmacy work flow. This example is one of so many other example that computers have create better quality of life.
In short, without doubt computers have make our life much better, much more convenient. Not only do improve the quality of our health, but they also give us a quick and so easy way to get information. Computers have revolutionized our lives and we should all support their continued development and use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of get information through the internet. One of so popular way to get information...
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Line 3, column 1090, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...brary to looking for books or articles. Which is totally inconvenient. As you can see...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
... physicians and pharmacies to follow up patients status. For instance, last year, I work...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...king at first, I was overwhelmed by how much computers have involved in the pharmacy...
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Line 5, column 1110, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
... many other example that computers have create better quality of life. In short, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2686.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11619047619 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11956738672 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51619047619 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3888605153 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4814814815 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.37037037037 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268171951955 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805786026088 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888238265143 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178151304025 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043986070732 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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