Friends are those who can know us better than we do since everyone needs support and mutual understanding in many aspects of their lives. For the whole human being people always tend to have friends. Although some people consider that making new friends is not important if you have the old ones I believe that new friends can be equally necessary for us because of their positive influence on our personal development, career opportunities and private life.
The mordern lifestyle requires people to be active and move. It is reasonable when people need to move from one place to other one, when they find a new job or update their interests. In such cases some of us can lose contacts with their old friends due to huge changes in their workplace or accomodation. If people physically cannot reach their old friends they try to find new ones because they need to be socialized in a new place. Moreover, new contacts can be beneficial to improve the awareness regarding many things of lifestyle or customs in that place where people have to move. It is also advantageous for the community when new comers can exchange their skills and knowledge with habitats.
The private relationship can also start from new friendship if people are single or have had sad experience. New friends can broaden their mind regarding their attitude or outlook on life. Those who feel a necessity to find a partner or to alter their boring life endavour to start communicating with new people.
In addition, new friends show people the way of new life or new interests like new habits or interests. For example, by sharing an information about preferrencies people get to know many new things in various topics such as sport, clothing, hobbies and work. They become more informed and can find useful things to do it themselves.
In conclusion I hope that people who find new friends can feel fulfillment with life when communicate with each other. Their friendship starting from exchanging information can last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67204809874 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1117193069 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23701470591 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797206390486 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672404668545 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14171416033 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639026884837 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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